Feedback for our pitch

Once we had showed our pitch of our film (The Recluse) we recieved some mixed feedback. We were told that we did not have enough visual evidence of our killer, instead we had just explained what he would be wearing, such as his suit, gloves etc. Therefore we decided to add a further slide showing inspirations from other films of the same genre. The images on the slide included the mask from the killer in 'Dead Man's Shoe's' as we thought it would be a good piece of costume to hide the killers identity. We also collected pictures of a suit and surgeon gloves as we decided as a group that was what our killer would be wearing during filming. We recieved criticism on our plot of the story, as the class felt that we had not entirely thought the story line through.

We was told that we presented our horror film trailer very well, with the majority of the class liking our ideas. They were all in agreement that a number of film companies would be interested in showing our film on there channel, with Warp or Film4 among the most popular. Our choice of locations was also appreciated as some of the places we are choosing to film at are fairly difficult to get to.

After recieving the feedback we have decided to make a few changes to our pitch so that a production company would be more likely to purchase our film. The main changes will include a better plot summary, showing that we have a better understanding of how we are going to make our film, also to add more images to show exactly what atmosphere we want our film to have.