Animatic Feedback

We recieved mixed feedback from our animatic. Our teacher complemented us on some of our shots, such as the establishing shots which set the scene, but said there was room for improvement on others. She did however like the fact that we used a vast number of different types of shots.

The under the arm shot of our killer looking at a family through the window was one of her favourite shots as it was relevant to the killer despising family life. The shot shows the killer clenching his fist at the sight of the family.

Although we were complimented on our establishing shots we will attempt to make them even better by making them slightly more exciting for the audience. We will do this by adding more spooky elements to the shots, such as the killer lurking in the shadows.

We also recieved criticism as we had not added titles to our animatic shots. Therefore we currently have no visual evidence of us knowing where the text will go or when the title of the film will be revealed to the audience. We will use the feedback we have recieved to ensure that we have improved any weak shots so that they are as good as possible for when we come to filming.